How A Non-Human Leveled Up My Writing

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How A Non-Human Leveled Up My Writing

How A Non-Human Leveled Up My Writing

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Letting a computer program suggest non-spelling-related edits to my writing has never been something I have taken seriously. Much like Groundhog Day it seemed like a cute idea that would yield very little useable information.

I was recently approached by the makers of an editing tool to try out their product and become an affiliate. Instead of trashing the request with the pile of similar requests I get each week, I decided to learn a bit more in this instance. The person doing the inviting was familiar with my blog and expressed interest in having me write for their site. I had also heard of this particular tool and knew it was legit.

As I wrote my first guest post for their site, I used the Premium version of their editing tool (which was provided free of charge to me as I evaluated being an affiliate) to see if I could find a grain of usefulness anywhere. It wasn’t that I thought my writing flawless, I just thought droid or app telling me how I could improve something as subjective as writing struck me as far-fetched.

I tried Pro Writing Aid anyway.

To start with, the usability is smooth enough that an inept 41-year-old who doesn’t even own a smart phone can use it. All I did was click the link to their tool and paste in my article (there are versions that work with MS Word, Google Docs, WordPress and more as well). A summary report immediately generated, as well as specific reports deep diving into each area of my writing.

Overused words and phrases, fillers, sentence length and difficult to read sentences were all brought to my attention. It even caught my incorrect use of ‘jive with’ and suggested the correction to ‘jibe with’. (If my misuse concerns you, keep in ind that until last month I thought Bing Crosby believed mele kalikimaka was ‘the WISE’ way to say Merry Christmas to you. P.S., it is actually ‘HAWAII’S’ way. I just blew a few of your minds, didn’t I?)

back to my writing…
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In many instances Pro Writing Aid not only identified issues, but made suggestions for improvement. I wrote ‘decided to use’ and ProWritingAid suggested ‘used’. ‘Sticky’ sentences that used too many common words and slowed down the reader were flagged. I was shown where I used certain

words repeatedly and offered suggestions for changes. Pro Writing Aid suggested omitting unnecessary words including ‘obviously’ and ‘that’, and even told me where I ranked among other users. I’ll admit that I felt a little subpar when I read “Your vocabulary was more dynamic (unique words/total) than 32% of ProWritingAid users”, but I got over it.

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I delved into detailed reports for style, grammar, overused words and phrases, readability, clichés, sticky sentences that slowed readers, diction, sentence length, thesaurus (this one is awesome and allows you to zoom through and select replacements as needed), pacing and more. As an added bonus, I edited my document while simultaneously reading report findings in the margin.

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To try it out yourself, use my affiliate link HERE, and enjoy the FREE VERSION immediately. If you decide to upgrade to the Priority version (that’s what I am using), please be sure to use our Beyond Your Blog voucher for 20% off! Just enter BEYOND2017 when you purchase.

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About the Author

Susan Maccarelli

Susan Maccarelli is the creator of Beyond Your Blog, a site helping bloggers successfully submit their writing for publishing opportunities beyond their personal blogs. She also offers online training and consulting to new bloggers looking for direction on submitting their writing for publication. Susan has interviewed dozens of editors from publications like The New York Times, Huffington Post, Brain, Child, Chicken Soup For The Soul, The Washington Post, and speaks at many respected writing and blogging conferences.